A Real Modern Rebel

A Real Modern Rebel

A Poem by Allison
"

You're a good one, miss young girl!

"
I want to make my parents proud.
I want to get good grades.
I want to scream extremely loud.
I won't fall in cascades.
I won't go in the teenage trap.
No, thank you, I don't want that crap.
I am the rebel that's good I say,
And you're so bad it's too clich
é.

© 2013 Allison


Author's Note

Allison
Deep thoughts and deep conversations trigger poems.

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I really enjoyed your poem. It is so easy for rhyme to sound forced but this flows.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Allison

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!~
... I ... can relate .. to this ..
AND I LOVE IT!
You are so. correct!
I love the rhyme scheme!
I love the contradictions!
I LOVE the poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Allison

10 Years Ago

Oh, my goodness!! Thank you so much!!! ^^
Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

No, thank you for the amazing poem~!

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Added on November 19, 2013
Last Updated on November 29, 2013
Tags: modern, society, rebel, rebellious, good, bad, parents, pride, proud, trap, escape

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