I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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Sometimes you really need a hug.You have penned this so splendidly Akshat :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
i feel the sadness you express in this poem...i need a hug too...let's just hug each other

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sometimes a hug is all we truly need, and I applaud you for asking and for knowing when you need help and support. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)
yeah exactly. sometimes i just need a hug....a lot of the time actually.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Heart-wrenching, and beautiful. Great job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Its nice one love can express in this way also......its just touching.




Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Perfectly said....sorry for the short review, it's again for the contest and I have no more words after reading this touching poem.

-Dell

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you Dell..it is alright!
I am hoping to get selected :)
Simple words, simple lines, simple poem, but with such deep meaning... liked it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
"Your arms just feel like home" Loved this line.......Beautiful.....desperation of a being to find solace in his lover's arms

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sameera :)

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Akshat♥

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