I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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Sometimes - we just need to forget everything. I don't know, Akshat. I don't do this as often as perhaps I could. Someone once said, plenty of time for sleep when you're dead. While I think that's a rather over-dramatic way of looking at it, there is wisdom in those words.

Today I blink less, breathe slower, and focus more - intently on all of life and it's wonderful mysteries around us. We are only given one shot on this Earth (according to popular opinion anyways) :) so - perhaps we ought to make the best of it and learn all we can before it becomes time to turn in our Ticket Of Life ?

As for hugs, they are often free (I even get hugs from strangers at the store when I'm with Chris sometimes), although holding of hands means more to me than any other sign of affection and expression and will always hold a special place in my heart for symbolism and symbiosis.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

I totally agree with U dear..thank U so much:)
dw817

7 Years Ago

Hang in there ! There's still a few more amusement rides left in life we have to go. :)
A really nice and touching poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

I would love it more if you have expressed it bit more..your liking in this poem
and what shou.. read more
On the whole, a very neat poem. It touched me with its simplicity but I feel it can easily be two different poems. You see, I am a little confused here. The first three stanzas talk about someone's need for you and how you reassure them. The last four talk about your sadness and your need for reassurance. I am sure you have your reason for combining the two. Great going!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

I need a hug but she is no here to do that :(
Thank you dear for your wonderful review...means.. read more
bindubabu

8 Years Ago

U r welcome.
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Correction : i need a hug but she was not with me to do that :( **
Sometimes all we need is compassion in order to feel whole. It is amazing what the touch of a hand or a warm embrace can do for someone when they are feeling down. Virtual hugs for you tonight. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

I hope to get real hug soon :)
Thank you :)
I like the lulling rhythm of this piece. I love the repetition of "I need a hug" through out it too. You even used some imagery with this line:

See the future of us in my eyes

And a simile with this line:

Your arms just feel like home

This is what I mean by "show me" writing. You did this quite well in this piece, but I would still like to see more. I know you have it in you. Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Where to find it online..just give me a link?
Ravyne Hawke

8 Years Ago

what is the language you write in?
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

English
Emotions expressed beautifully here in this poem. Keep it up... And yes, thanks for the add...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) You are welcome for the add thing :)
Beautiful poem, so very touching and filled with need.

"Your arms just feel like home" I loved this line. It truly says it all.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

I am glad that you liked it:)
Thank you dear :)

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