I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



Reviews

its beautifully written..
quite sensitive!!
love it!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
This is my favourite

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)
True emotions. And really sometimes all we need is the support of a dear one to become as strong as possible again. Liked your poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Words of wisdom, you're good at this an insightful one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)
Ency Bearis

8 Years Ago

you're welcome
Your use of language is precise and delicate, your imagery is crafted with care. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

thank you:)
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Pax
sometimes a hug makes a difference ~ just to feel those embrace... comforting us is just enough to feel that we are not alone in our problems ~

nice work Akshat♥ !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Yeah right!
Thank you dear :)
Pax

8 Years Ago

your most welcome :)
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

;)
I like this, its not in my face, its simple wording, its even soothing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This poem is so emotional..it touched be deep
You have a talent in writing poems
Keep writing my friend :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
A hug, a simple hug can take away all of our pain and fear...A really nice write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Dakshta

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

;)
*Jappi* Pa dost...
Such a wonderful. Jappi is way ton a medicine
You get what yo want when you pull someone close intact and feel those essence and those moments you ask god to stop those tickling clocks and those heart pulse.
Simply way ahead and amazingly expressed :)

Will go through you art of work.

Cheers!!
Singh :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

*Hugs*
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Hugs (^_^)
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Yea :D

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