I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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A hug is d physical acknowedgement of love and care..
u penned down the passionate side of a hug wich connects me immediately..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
No show off, no ornamentation... Simple yet sweet. Right from the heart. Its a raw masterpiece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Charu Charms

8 Years Ago

you're most welcome!
^-^ That piece was amazing.... How sometime just a Hug, tells more than our words can explain...
A Hug to a friend whom you meet after long time..

Beautifully captured the feelings..!!
Surely I need a hug rite now......

Posted 8 Years Ago


smilempsn

8 Years Ago

:P I need a real one :P
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

come to my home lol..
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

..hehe.. :P
actually i like your writing.....
it is so good
good thoughts
good way of writing..
feels like true writing from the heart

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear..means a lot to me :)
I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes..
like these lines...adoring :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
there is no one who doesn't need a hug anytime :). sweet poem full of feelings.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

i like spreading love...thank you :)
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
Your poetry is deep, however I sense a depressing tone of sadness and hurting. It would do better to take a more optimistic perspective, just my view.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
aww,so sweet
I need a hug right now after reading this:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
well I am a huger. good poem 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thats really nice:)
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

yeppers :)
wow,i need a hug right now..
thanks for sharing it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)

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Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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