I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
very touching, i like this i think i need a hug sometimes too. i sometimes go through depression and it feels like i really need one.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

yes,you are right...thank you:)
Tavionna

8 Years Ago

your welcome =)
*two thumbs way up*

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
XxKooperxX

8 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Beautiful! I want to give you a hug now after reading this poem. *hugs* Sometimes a hug does more than words could ever do. Great poem! 100%

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much...means a lot to me :)
wondeful - yea its true - sometimes, a good hug can make you forget pain.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Sad but filled with anticipation of longing :) Great one:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
PP

8 Years Ago

:)
Absolutely loved this! :)

~Erinne

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear:)
I would say that you almost explained the unexplainable Akshat, but of course it can't be. I feel it deeply though, as something I once had in the distant past that is now lost forever... I would say more if I could, but no words can.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

you are absolutely right here dear :)
It's good. Everyone has their moments where they feel all they need is a hug, and it would help.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

yeah you are right :)
OMG, this radiates such a feeling I can't describe. I love it. I know hugs can surely do that! WHen i feel sad, i cry in my room all alone..so no one can see me...so i can express it alone.. When someone hugs me, i know the warmth, the love, everything brightens up even if it lasts for a moment. Its there. A bright smile from the person that gave you that warmth to show he/she cares. = )

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

you are so true here..thank you:)
Sleeping Maiden

8 Years Ago

= ) no problem

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