I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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aww,so sweet
I need a hug right now after reading this:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
well I am a huger. good poem 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thats really nice:)
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

yeppers :)
wow,i need a hug right now..
thanks for sharing it!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
very touching, i like this i think i need a hug sometimes too. i sometimes go through depression and it feels like i really need one.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

yes,you are right...thank you:)
Tavionna

11 Years Ago

your welcome =)
*two thumbs way up*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
XxKooperxX

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Beautiful! I want to give you a hug now after reading this poem. *hugs* Sometimes a hug does more than words could ever do. Great poem! 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much...means a lot to me :)
wondeful - yea its true - sometimes, a good hug can make you forget pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Sad but filled with anticipation of longing :) Great one:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
Absolutely loved this! :)

~Erinne

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear:)

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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

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