I Need A Hug

I Need A Hug

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

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If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything




© 2013 Akshat♥


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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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beautifully expressed, sometimes a hug can do a lot what talks can't do, u feel so safe nd sound when someone who is close to heart hugs u it gives u support and strength and makes u realize that yes i too mean a lot for someone atleast. so gr8 work thanks for reminding someone important.......

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Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

It always feel good when someone hugs you especially when you never expected... thank you nupur:)
How true and well expressed...nice job..Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you Valentine :)
A very sentimental writeup. We all have such moments when we wish someone was just there for us - no questions asked. You need not explain that they are special you just have to ask them to be with you and they will know. Great!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I absolutely love this. You nailed it. There is so much in here. It is not only talking about a need but the way you wrote it makes the reader feel that need. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Nice poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sincere beauty. I couldn't describe it any other way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Very nice emotional write, and yes sometimes people do just need a hug and someone there for them. A relatable and nice write. Enjoyed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
This poem feels sincere and heartfelt. It surely makes me want to hug.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
right now I could use one because sometimes you can't forget.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

It happens..
This is great!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)

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Akshat♥

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