Be Positive

Be Positive

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

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The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,
while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong
You need to be calm
You will get everything with time

© 2015 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
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"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D
Vria P Crow

8 Years Ago

We need an instant messaging system here:P
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Someone please add a messaging system here :P



Reviews

So very truthful, very nicely written and said

Posted 1 Year Ago


inspiring poem.. i really like

Posted 4 Years Ago


good work! inspiring poem to feel positive...👍👍👍👍👍😊

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hello akshat.....Well this is a sweet poem.... Though not so awesome as literature point of view but good thoughts...my honest views!! lol

Posted 4 Years Ago


Akshat♥

4 Years Ago

Thank for giving your time and saying honest views:)
Your thoughts are beautiful, but a bit scattered. You started off with a rhyme scheme and you ended up in free verse. Other than that , feelings are genuine and nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Akshat♥

4 Years Ago

I dont really go by any scheme or verse..i write what i like and in whatever way i want nothing else.. read more
Can't say much more than has been said. This is inspiring, honest and filled with insight and wisdom.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Akshat♥

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear for your kind words:)
The different colors you use captures the colorfulness of life and how people are so different and diverse! Life is an adventure worth taking instead of sitting around.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Akshat♥

5 Years Ago

True! Thank you:)
lovely

enjoyed reading it

love the flow of emotions and words

its like an inspiration for me

stay blessed

xx

Posted 5 Years Ago


Akshat♥

5 Years Ago

U too..thank you:)
Lovely little poem, honest and simple, love it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The poem is a tad rushed at the beginning but it is otherwise a very good peace. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Day Dreamer

6 Years Ago

You're welcome

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Added on January 30, 2013
Last Updated on March 29, 2015

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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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