Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
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Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[karan kotabagi]

reading this poem gives me courage to face the world more positively ...a great one!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Saumya]

i completely agree with each and every line here.....
not because these lines seem very good...which actually are....no doubts:)
but simply for the reason, this is how one should live through life, and these are the things i have basically
tried.....n the results are beyond wndrful ..:)

this made me remember a quote by a well known poet:
" the purpose of life, is a life with purpose,
therefore, when life gives you one reason to cry,
give it ten reasons to smile....!"

you simply need to b strong, and nothing and no one can let you down....!!

all over, a very thoughtful, and worth reading and imbibing write..!!!!

well done..!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Saumya]

youre wlcmd:)

[sanya]

these are true words really awesome

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

great message... nice composition of words.... had a strong effect on me...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[anxia]

Effective picture, Factual lines, Great message! Keep it up.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Terra]

This is a really strong poem. It speaks out, and touched me, like in a good way. I loved the different color fonts and it was really easy to read which is always good. All in all, good job!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Terra]

Of course!

[dw817]

Well, I don't think I can compete against Mr. Magill's review below.

Wow - with the 951 words he wrote I can see why he is Top Reviewer. Ok then ! In any case, as I mentioned in my last review, I love the usage of color you put in your work, and yes, peace of mind and serenity are definitely key to a long and happy life.

And happiness, as you said, is indeed an investment for the future. You give it, it will come back to you in time. The very best to you ... :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[dw817]

Take care ... (ᵔᴥᵔ)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

your writing is telling that you are broken inside but still you are trying to be courageous. and that is the positive thinking. keep it up dude :)
your poem is inspiring me too :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

:)

[Akshat♥]

;)

[Akanksha]

Really nicely written... I found all ur poems have a strong message... And i really like that in them...
Keep on writing such inspiring words... :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[StarSandwich]

Very Beautiful.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)