Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[Ravyne Hawke]

You did an excellent job of blending the title and the poem together, staying focused on the positive through out. I love the ending as well.. live in the present, remain calm, stay positive.. wonderful message! I would still like to see you break out of your comfort zone and write with metaphors and show me prose instead of tell me prose. That is entirely up to you though, but I know you have the passion either way. Well done dear.

[Akshat♥]

I never tried metaphors...don't know much about it..help me if you can :)
and i don't know how to show prose.. lol :D
Thank you dear :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Let me give you a few simple examples of a metaphor:

Love is a red red rose
Death is a train wreck bound to happen
Fear swallowed me whole

We all now that love is not a rose, but it is a way of explaining what love is.. showing what love is.. same with death, we know it isn't a train wreck, but death can sure feel like one.. and fear cannot swallow anything, but doesn't it feel like it does when you are in the "grips of fear" (another metaphor!). Does that help any?

[Akshat♥]

Yes it helped me:)
Thank U dear:) will try to improve

[Ravyne Hawke]

You will do just fine.. you have so much passion

[Akshat♥]

So sweet of U to say that:)

[L.u.c.a.s.]

I love this poem so much! So much gentle Power!! This poem and Miracle are very comforting, and inspiring! Please keep it up!!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and the message is well presnted and happily accepted. Nice.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[reflectingus]

This is nice. Optimism can really go a long way, and helping others should be a part of your life. I think everyone can learn from this poem. In fact, I feel just a bit more positive after reading your poem. We should keep in mind that we are not alone, and be happy with what we got.

[Akshat♥]

I am so glad that you feel more positive after reading this poem :)
Thank you dear :)

[Shivam Murari]

Strong and Calm, two totally different features, yet you have managed to put them together nicely through this poem. I like the way you have coloured "people" depicting that there are various types of people around us. Message is good!
Nice poem. Seems you are quite accomplished in modern poetry.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you shivam...means a lot to me :)
I can see your hard work :)

[Shivam Murari]

Hard work? :/

[Akshat♥]

reading my poetry needs a brain and using your brain is hard work :D

[Shivam Murari]

LOL :P Perhaps.Go for my poetry then. The latest one will get you to scratch your head, I bet :P

[Akshat♥]

i will...not in a mood right now :)

[Shivam Murari]

:)

[Ency Bearis]

A food for thought poem with such advise. Great write.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure and you're welcome

[Akshat♥]

Take care :)

[Ency Bearis]

: )

[beautiful life]

We should be positive in life to reach great heights .
Fantastic write..I can totally relate to it :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for reviewing so many poems of mine :)
means a lot to me :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Good message,I've been down in the dumps lately i guess everything around me, but you're right, got to be positive, like how this come together.
great job.

[Akshat♥]

Being positive is very important now a days..
Thank you my friend!
Take care :)

[Aethereal]

Tranquility comes from the inside, and not the outside. No matter what happens on the outside, it’s possible to keep a calm mind. A calm mind may then have an effect on the outside to make this a much better world to live in. The seed of happiness grows from the inside out.

[Akshat♥]

so TRUE!
Thank you my friend:)