Since The Day I Met You

Just came to my mind :)

Since the day I met you
You brighten up my life
We talk so less
The silence was so right
We found care 
in each other's eyes

Since the day I met you
My silence is over
My weakness turned into strength
You become by motivation
You take me away 
from my lonely life

Since the day I met you
My day gets over so fast
I love each and every 
moment of my life

Whenever you say 'Hi'
it felt like you touched my heart
and there's nothing left to prove


Since the day I met you
It felt like I already knew you
Your face seems so familiar
all the scars you have
shows the strength of you

Since the day I met you
Sharing is an excuse to be with you
You changed the way I saw the world

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you...check out my new poem-a friend:)

[Belinda Rice]

Will do not a problem happy thanksgiving

[Akshat♥]

happy thanksgiving to you too :)

[Ayesha Atif]

Beautiful imagery.

Keep exercising your talent!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem i love it and can't wait to read more

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear:)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[SimplyDisastrous]

Awww, this was so touching! This reminds me of what I've felt for some people in my lifetime, so I can relate. Good poem!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Daisy Morgy]

i like the message of this poem being a hopless romantic myself i think its sweet and short :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you 😊

[rohini]

It is from your heart., so sweet and simple words made me to think of someone..
Thank you.

[Akshat♥]

Am glad that you liked it :)

[rohini]

It is from your heart., so sweet and simple words made me to remember someone..
Thank you.

[Akshat♥]

Am glad that you liked it :)

[Ankita]

This beautiful piece of yours reflects true and honest feelings. It seems you have poured your heart in it and which makes it all the more romantic and beautiful. Lines 3 and 4 I like the most. "Since the day I met you,/Sharing is an excuse to be with you." couldn't be better. Very good write up. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Can tell from this your heart has truly been touched by love. Line twelve the phrase is a bit awkward and nineteen change know to knew.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)
I am changing it

[StarSandwich]

Romantic, sweet and lovely. It was very upfront and I love it. Love is great! Keep it up.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Imara]

"The silence was so right" This line speaks personally to me, I think its great because I think we can all feel that 'awkward silence' and we all know what a 'comfortable silence' is and how rare it is.

Overall it's very straightforward in its approach to express the emotion of love. I would suggest giving a little context, why are you stronger with him. So that way there is some action but if you choose to talk about the emotion then I suggest you change the style. You aren't saying anything that hasn't been said in a way that it hasn't been said before. I think there is a better way you could express this emotion in a more creative way so it's not so...for lack of a better word...bland. Other than that I think its a solid poem about your feelings to this person and I'm happy that you feel this way :)

[Akshat♥]

Ok..I got your point...thank you :)