I can't live without you

I can't live without you

A Poem by Akshat♥
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feeling of loss

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I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.


you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you


you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry


I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..


how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me


my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..


I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

© 2013 Akshat♥


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you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You've done a good job of expressing your feelings in this poem.. loss, sadness, loneliness. It almost sounds like true feelings were never brought to light.. and if she knew, she might have stayed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

She knew still she left ...
Thank you dear :)
Very emotive lines. Very sad.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
wow i couldnt have put it better myself your poetry is so real and it sounds like its comming from heart ......i realy liked this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
the second paragraph was just wow..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Dakshta

8 Years Ago

:)
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

;)
hmm...
Sometimes our biggest happiness turns to our worst sadness...
People whom we know, becomes people we Knew....
The more we are close to someone, the bigger is the gap in our heart when they leave........
hmm....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

I completely agree with you... Thank you :)
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

hmm :)
Say the truth in any case...specially in this one :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


so deep emotions:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can soo relate to this.
Your poetry inspires me! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a strong write. love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥

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