I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[TheFemininePad]

A very heart breaking poem with the power of love demonstrated at the beginning of this poem. I have a small suggestion. The line that reads, "but you doesn't know about the feelings" could be changed to "but you didn't know about the feelings". It enables the flow of this beautiful poem to continue to flow naturally. Happy Valentine's Day!

[Glenn]

I have....should I say "had" this person in my life, and know all too well then feelings expressed in this piece! I have subjected myself to these feelings over and over with her, and seem to have finally learned my lesson, but this write helps me understand why I have done so....I felt that I couldn't live without her! Thank you for sharing this and I look forward to reading more from you!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

*sigh* yes i can understand the feeling all too well.
the worst is when you haven't lost the person yet but you can feel the day come closer to when you will lose them, and that also being the day your heart will die. its somewhat of a weakness i guess, not to be able to live without someone. but if we don't let ourselves have some weakness, we might never be able to feel love. wonderful poem though, and beautiful concept. so very true.

[Michael C.S. Clifford]

Anybody who has ever known the pain of rejection feels the words which you have written.

It is significant how you write ' I ' as small case ' i '; in desperation we all become modest.

Michael

[Calypso]

This makes me think of a boy...
A different type of poem on this St. Valentine's Day.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem of love. We need to tell the special people we need and want them. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Rossen]

Good work here, wonder what life would be like If wee took all the "t off of all the
I can"t in the world!

[Brad]

i used to think van morrison was the king of surrender...but you've given your heart a thousand fold here

[SR Urie]

nice sentiments, good job (you need to revisit your grammatical syntax though). Bz

[Brianna Brie]

Hmmmm....that last verse says a lot. Nice write!