Miracle

Miracle

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

All the things we see, they are all miracle...

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Naturally Impossible Events
are what we call Miracles.

Meditation can bring Miracles.

People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not 
to fly in the air or going into water 
without a mask,
but to walk on earth.

White clouds,A Blue sky,Green leaves,
the Black curious eyes of a child,
Yellow Grains,Spring Season.
All is a Miracle.


There is Nothing like spending quality time with great Friends.

A single Mom who's working and still
finds time to take her kids out,
making good  food,
that's a Miracle.

A single Dad who's working whole day and earn money
to make their child live in a healthy environment,
that's a Miracle.

A Youngster who says no to Fast food
and yes to healthy food,
that's a Miracle.

Realizing good things in us
and making them better
that's a Miracle.

You should realize that you have the power.

If u want a miracle,Be the miracle.
You all have the divine spark.

You all have the gift for bringing
bliss and glee to the world.

See after feeling this.
You feel strong from inside..
that's a Spark.

Bring this Spark alive in you
and see the real world.

This world containing all things in it,
is all a Miracle.

© 2015 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
I write this while seeing a miracle today.

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this is a poem full of wisdom and truth...
People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not
to fly in air or going in water
without mask,
but to walk on earth.

that line made me realize a lot of things... thanks for sharing this poem to us...

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Wow ! How colorful, beautiful rainbow you created here ! Love what you wrote here, "If you want a miracle, be the miracle."

Yet some people may disagree and say, "We can't all be princesses, someone has to clap when I walk by." Well, there will always be people like that in the world. :)

But the greatest miracle of all, is you. As I think Dr. McCoy told Kirk in Star Trek onetime, if you take the planet Kirk lives on and go out from there, leave the planetary orbit, the solar system, leave the galaxy, leave the universe, and even beyond.

There is still and only one Kirk. That is your miracle, Akshat. You are your own miracle, and what you decide to do with your life is sincerely and utterly up to you. Don't disappoint the cosmos. :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear ..means a lot to me:)
dw817

10 Years Ago

UBetcha - take care ...
To speak kind words,a miracle indeed. Nice told.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Yes, miracles are with us each day when we view them as you speak of. Your writing is most inspirational and supportive of the better ideals and qualities of mankind! Thank you for another way to view that which is seemingly ordinary, but really extraordinary!
I am impressed by the way you carry the idea throughout your write!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear..means a lot to me..I hope you will read and love my other poems :)
I love the repetition of both miracle and spark in this piece. I think they lend well to the flow. There is a lot of emotion in this piece and I know you are an emotional writer. I have to agree with Astro, I would also like to see some pizazz in this poem.. some showing instead of telling. For instance instead of saying fastfood say a burger and fries (or equivalent) and instead of healthy food, say apples and rice.. do you see what I mean? show instead of tell.. I think you could do that through out the poem, tighten it and really make it shine. There is nothing wrong with it as written, with the exception of some grammatical errors, but if you are really serious about writing poetry, then you need to show your emotions more and tell them less.. I want to see your poetry come alive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your concern dear :)
I have corrected grammatical errors as Astro said..
From.. read more
this is realllllllllllly a lovely poem...!!
never expected to lively see and feel such beauty in a poem..!!
something, which is really good,and unique, here is, the mentioning of mother, father, nature, and our own self, the ones which really are a miracle to us..!!
this is something, that makes makes it exceptionally good..!!
very well done
keep writing and rocking,
with best wishes,
saumya

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Saumya

10 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!! :)
The whole poem is a mix of emotions, thanksgiving, joys, reminisce, laughter. A like how you have put a correct definition of miracle throughout the poem, while most of us fail to see or notice. A moving piece, Akshat! :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shivam Murari

10 Years Ago

Ok Ok. then at least send me :P
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

i will message you...don't worry :)
Shivam Murari

10 Years Ago

haha! :P
'A single Mom who's working and still
finds time to take her kids out,
making good food,
that's a Miracle.'

i found this such a positive message and one i needed to hear, so down to earth and understanding that it truly is the simple things that are imortant. i needed to read this today as i'm feeling slightly down and out of sorts and it lifted me. made me feel thankful for what i've got. fantastic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

I am glad that you liked it..Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)
Grammatical errors aside, the sentiment of your piece shines through. The Miracle of Life, the inspiration for us all, sadly, overlooked but easily gained. I'm not sure if English is your second language or not, but you have a firm grasp of it, but like you say in your poem, where there is a spark, there is a potential to make it brighter. In this case, I believe you could 'shine' your piece up a bit, and offer up something more miraculous than you thought you could.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Astro

10 Years Ago

You are welcome, I will sample some more of your writing in the future.
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

you are a good person from heart ..my friend..take care :)
Astro

10 Years Ago

Thank you and you as well.
INTRODUCTION

Here are my first impressions:

1. Wow! Awesome color effects!
2. The theme of MIRACLES is stunning!
3. The final message is inspiring!

INTERPRETATION

1. Meditation: Meditation brings a wonderful gift to those who are closed and open.
2. Miracles: Miracles happen everyday.
3. Mother Earth: The symbolic reference is our homeland which is love.

CONCLUSION

1. Beautiful work!
2. "...we have the power" Reminds me of "Bruce Almighty"
3. I see Innocence and Idealism which are my two favorite things!

love,
ria

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you for this lovely review dear..means a lot to me :)
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome:D
thanks A. I was a single parent + I think I did that.

Nice sentiment poetically expressed

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)

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