I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[Ravyne Hawke]

I like the simplicity of this write, especially since the theme, I believe, behind this is complex.. Do we ever really know someone? And if we think we do, what happens when they act differently from what we expect? These are profound questions that your poem seems to explore. Good job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Beautifully written :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

knowing someone is great:)

[Hitman]

very emotional write:)

[kaylynnmelody♥]

This was wonderfully crafted and written. I love the visual. :)

[exotic flotsam]

Alas all good things come to an end. You still know all you shared. It has morphed, perhaps grown. Sometimes I demand of myself that I reconsider an idealization. Change is the singularity of existence. Left behind, is change's catalyst. I sense resignation, with regret. An ethereal thermal grounded in a sad lamentation. Like it simply spilled out of you. I like it. Some sytactic and voice issues arise, but remain petty to the entirety of the piece.

[deeps]

I really enjoyed the inspiration in this write.
So nicely written.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Such a simple idea yet its conveyed splendidly. love it :)Such a simple idea yet its conveyed splendidly. love it :)

[∂αʌ<..]

nice...sad...but i dont know...your spirit might be saying otherwise!
but it does indeed flow-smooth...
a lost one whom is still loved somewhere...well-written!

[♥ EmeraldHeart &..]

It's pretty good. Could use a little more oomph but I like it