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A Poem by Akshat♥
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Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

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Words which I wanted to say 
I didn't say
I think you knew them already



Things which I wanted to show 
I didn't shown  them either
I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen
I didn't tell you
I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets
which I wanted to tell you
I think telling  you all this
makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth
but somehow can't help myself
so told you a lie
I think you know these lies already


I am in a position 
where I know that you know 
all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 
on believing  you. .


 

© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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feelings well expressed! loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
feelings have been given words nicely, liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
Twice I've read this and at the end I keep reading "believing IN you" for some reason that little stinker of a word just wants in your poem.. maybe it is because the protagonist needs to believe that he won't leave over the lies and secrets, that he will hang around and resolve the issues. This is a well composed poem and the repetition that you use works wonderfully in this piece. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

In this poem, i mean to say that...This girl knows everything about him that if he says something or.. read more
Ravyne Hawke

8 Years Ago

ahh okay =)
Must agree, the us of pictures and poetry , really nicely done. and there is a deeper message also. Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you...means a lot to me :)
nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
'You know already' that its something amazing , you wrote... and I liked it.. Nicely written.. ^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
I got emotionally attached to this write of yours..
Thanks for sharing it..cheers!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nicely written:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥

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