You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

please give honest reviews..give ratings also:)
read carefully before reviewing. . .

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Really nice job of using repetition here. I like the colors and think they add to the effect--same with the pictures. It seemed to me that the beginning stanzas were stronger than those near the end, though.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Hey, this is a great piece of work... It is true of many relationships and it is very humble and honest.
I like it.
I think the last stanza doesn't do itself justice unless I do not fully understand your meaning:

so I can't help myself
on believing you. .

What are you trying to express? I would substitute the 'on' with some form of 'in'... believing in you / In believing you...

Otherwise it is a great piece, stand out in its simplicity and really expresses a kind love.
The pictures go great and give it a good illustration.

[Sunflower 20]

i really like the way you used visuals and different coloured font to tell the story. they made for gret imagery. thanks for sharing :)

[?]

Very nice
Sometimes letting go of your feelings, what you want to say, do, hidden secrets, can bring 2 closer. Its always a chance, life is a chance, but if we dont take that chance, we will never know.
This was a beautiful piece of someone wanting to bear heart and soul to another.

[msharma]

A heart melting appeal made on your part, felt the emotions as if they were my own taking me again to the past memories.

[Valentine]

Yes, many feelings are hidden, baring tham can often remove the pain and doubt..ot..if the feelings are not returned..double the pain..We all have to take that chance..Different..but I liked it..VaLENTINE

[N.Sevilla]

I like how you put important phrases in different colors to show their significance.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

Beautiful write, nice touch with the pics

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime best to express the truth and see where things will land. Thank you for a strong poem with powerful words and artwork.
Coyote

[Julie Beth]

this is amazing i have nothing bad to say about it :D