A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[Dove]

The people we love most are the ones most capable of hurting us, i love this

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good efforts..!!!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

That feeling absolutely sucks!
When you tell someone an important secret and they go opening their mouth to someone else, it makes you want to strangle them and that's the mistake that most of us have. We are vulnerable to tell our darkest secrets but yet we are risking a lot. Even if it means a dear friend or love.
Nice job with this! The pictures help with it too.

[stars are far]

that is amazing
i loved it ..

[Farrah Grahm]

Those we love can hurt us the most. Great message

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice poem :-) Mistakes make us human :-)

[Meaghan]

I like this, because I know where you're coming from and it's always good to know that you're not alone in the things you go through.

[msharma]

Feels as if somewhere hurt, to err is human to forgive is divine. Love this world as your own will keep you happy always.

[Richard Williams]

A simple yet good poem utilizing a theme all can relate to, well done.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like the changing colors--they accent the point you're trying to make. It's a message that many people can relate to, but rather than literally stating your thoughts, I think it would be more powerful and memorable to use some analogies or more vivid language. There is a lot of emotion and pain in this, but for me, the feeling is dulled when I have read very similar work before.