A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Sweetie this contest is for 12-20 WORDS not lines. Great poem but not for this contest. : )

[-Scribe in Style-]

Some mistakes hurt too much, Sometimes it is that they occur too often, sometimes we take it in our stride, and hope that one day the pain will not be as much...
Love is stronger than the mistakes and if it wants to it will find a way through. That is my relation to your beautifully penned piece of work.
Well done.

[Short.Nerd]

I love how this is set up and the meaning behind it. Sometimes mistakes like that suck:/ Great write!

[Ian Faraway]

I like this poem, it shows our mistakes and how it hurts but also how it can be a learning experience. J'adore.

[Sunflower 20]

i really like you use of font and colour, it helps with the emotion. well done :)

[AnnaMariaQQss]

Well hello there Poet Friend.

I Have a few suggestions for your poem, which, might I add, is wonderful. Once you work out the few kinks..I do believe you will have a nice master piece Indeed!
So I am going to toss away my pointing stick...I will now cap when I insert a suggestion for " The poems " Grammar or/and words. "


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[ImagineItAll]

This is a very powerful statement that you make: being unable to trust again in others because someone you loved and trusted hurt you so badly. I think this is something many can relate to.

I love the pictures you put along with this too.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Some people are just to close minded to walk in someone else's shoes, but thank you for reminding us with this write.. I think it is great.

[S.J. Wist]

That door definitely gets the point across lol. Nicely written too.

[Tasha]

I really liked this, and the picture of the door and the quote. (I loved the entire piece.) I too know how it feels to consider someone to be your everything, but to them its a game. This feeling stinks, and trust me it may not seem easy now, but it gets easier everyday. This was beautiful and straight from the heart. You did a fantastic job with this.