Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

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You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized
Every time you talk to me,
I'm terrified to be me..
I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear
just you and me be here

you have many dear friends
that make me emulous
I wish you would have known this someday
that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world
I wish you have known that I have
a crush on you..

You seem special everyday
your bright magical face
brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows
that I have a crush on you

© 2013 Akshat♥


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we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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You've summed up the fear of rejection well in this piece. I think these words sum up the fear really well

I'm terrified to be me..

Don't we all feel that? well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Yes, We feel exactly that...sometimes it is shyness and sometimes fear of rejection
Thank you.. read more
Filled with emotional and sweet words..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Well off course it has A REASON..!!
Something about the person attracted you, so you have a Crush on her.. rite :P

Very well explained though ^-^
'Everybody is here but nobody knows
that I have a crush on you' ^_-


Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
I loved this! It seems so innocent and cute, and seemed like a song to me!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
This was very well and beautifully written!! Great verb choice!! good write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I love crushes ...it felt so nice :)
emotions are so dense here ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I feel the same:)
crush is always feel nice..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This poem pretty much summarized high school. Well done. It may not have been your intent, but I related right away.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

9 Years Ago

My intent was pretty much the same :P
Thank you:)
A very well written poem.
Crush! Something we all can relate to!
I love the honesty and the simplicity in your poems.
They are raw and beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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