Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

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You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized
Every time you talk to me,
I'm terrified to be me..
I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear
just you and me be here

you have many dear friends
that make me emulous
I wish you would have known this someday
that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world
I wish you have known that I have
a crush on you..

You seem special everyday
your bright magical face
brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows
that I have a crush on you

© 2013 Akshat♥


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we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Seize the moment...life is too short.. xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, may I suggest though, crush is being repeated a lot here, and theres so many words that mean the same thing that adds spice to this cute poem.

Also 1 typo You seems SHOULD BE You Seem

Great poem, very cute!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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