Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized

Every time you talk to me,

I'm terrified to be me..

I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear

just you and me be here

you have many dear friends

that make me emulous

I wish you would have known this someday

that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world

I wish you have known that I have

a crush on you..

You seem special everyday

your bright magical face

brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows

that I have a crush on you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chirinos20]

we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is incredible. Well done.

[Jazique]

Awe how sweet as I have felt that way oh so many times. Nicely done and color coordinates of sunshine, crush, terrified and more step out feeling your emotions in your words. You did a amazing job so keep it up as it relates to many readers.

[Frantzuu]

Great poem, very passionately done. A lot of us can relate to this piece, sometimes fear hold us back from going after what we want. But then if one never try one will never know. Great poem.

[msharma]

Looks as if the real emotions have let themselves pouring out .Loved the innocence in the piece.

[honeyleens]

The first stanza has a great rhyme scheme (could even be a song!). For some reason, I loved this line "your bright magical face." Because isn't that how we see those we care about? To us, they are animated, magical people. Lots of longing, I liked the emotion. Good job.

[Ima]

Nice and clear. Just like many feel. It was a good reading.

[Hunter C. Brown]

a very good write. i enjoyed it. you really projected how lots of people feel about talking to their crushes.

[Absentee Reality Check]

This is good, It translates that longing feeling of wanting someone and not being able to tell them well. perhaps the word crush is used too many times? But either way this is pretty good piece. =)

[theopenbook]

the crushes are the worst and the best part of the teenage life:) good job:)

[Sleeping Maiden]

AHhh... in love with this!! I totally can relate once again! =D I wish i could send this poem to the guy I love the most but... ehh.. it feels like a dream.. only a dream.. to me. But beautiful write. Such feelings! So strong and passionate. ^o^ Very well written. I love your poems!