Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Suditi]

The last line, wow.
It is true..so many times we dont acknowledge all the wonderful things we have.

Life gives us so much
We just never consent it

Beautiful lines. We just dont accept happiness at times. It is there, right it front of us, and we choose to ignore it.
A superb write.

[Archia]

I quite liked this, it came across as deep. The last line just ties it all together. Oh and the second picture is interesting.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Good writing with correct illustrative pictures. With regards.

[MandaBear]

it was very interesting :)

[rae52]

good not quite sure i understood after the first bit

[fernii]

love it honestly, it a great poem :)

[Adelia Alighieri]

You could make a song out of it, it belongs with music. Loving the photos, they compliment the words.

[topsyturvy]

"We always want more, more than others" so true. "Life gives us so much we just never consent it". Great write!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

absoutely fantastic!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was beautiful, you spoke the truth in every line