Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

I really liked the flow of this but even with your brilliance, a flow is something I don't even care if you have or not. Your words speak VOLUMES and you have knowledge that many of us do not have - you inspire me to continue to speak my voice, a voice much softer than yours but with a lot of the same words. Thank you for this piece... it's incredible and the blunt, honest truth.

[Nath]

A well written truth - it's in human nature to always have dreams and wishes left unfilfilled, no matter how much we have already.
But no matter how much or little we have, we don't find happiness in belongings. Happiness is a feeling that isn't attached to material things which makes it pointless to search it accumulating those.
You expressed that really well in your poem, great job!

[Bone and Brine]

Beautiful.

[Daytonight]

This really grabs you from the start and doesn't let go. Well done. Keep on penning.

[trisha roy]

i love it

[Droll Prole]

Make the most of what you have cause life is what you make it, own it and take responsibility for it seems to be what this poem is saying. The end line just sums everything up so well.

[nishalization]

Flawless... Amazingly written! Gonna be in my favourites.

[light and ashes]

Inspiring and every line is so true!

[Loner]

Loved it an honest right of people being thankless and blaming it on other or their lives beautiful expression ....

[Audrey Howitt]

It is true that we often lose sight of what we have--even when that road is difficult or painful. Great write!