I am something that you never expected

I am something that you never expected

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

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Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected
Never expect anything from anybody
Never expect the things that hurt you in return


Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last
Sometimes we feel unwanted
Sometimes we help others so much and
expect something in return
Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much


These expectation always hurt us at last
These feelings of loneliness tear us apart
These bad thoughts create a pressure in us
These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected
I always feel different 
different from others
All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you 
I always feel like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,
If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,
I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops
I do the unexpected thing
so I also just stop

© 2013 Akshat♥


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I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Love this. The words flowed, and I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Me too;) thank you:)
quite close to heart and the feel when things seems far away coming closer to us.
nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Curses.. I wrote a really long detailed comment and WC ate it.. I will just say that this is very well done with some great images and flow. The last stanza though gave me trouble.. if everyone stops, wouldn't the expected be to stop too.. so the unexpected would be to just keep moving on. Expectations create pain, disappointment and sometimes loss. Better to live without expectations so there is no suffering.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

oh...please try to message me again about all that...I don't know about that :P
Ravyne Hawke

10 Years Ago

The main point is in my remarks about the last stanza.. the rest was just about lines I enjoyed.. re.. read more
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Ok ok..no problem...Thank you :)
I got really impressed by the picture..
Sweet poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
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All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

Loved those lines :). About the rest - priceless, but still can't understand, how "poems" are made in English. In Russian there are tonns of rules, like tempo, rhymes, step and other things. So, for me it's quite different to understand by now. But still, liked it, was awesome to read :D.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Well,I also don't no from when i am writing and why i am writing..
I am just writing for you a.. read more
Amazing write.. and the best part.....this one rhyme :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dakshta

10 Years Ago

?
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

? ;)
Dakshta

10 Years Ago

;)
nice and wise...great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Touched my heart :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i really liked it:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

love these lines... i really liked the beginning..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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