Waiting is all I have

Waiting is all I have

A Poem by Akshat♥
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well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

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Waiting is something too easy to say
quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me
are dead
You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me
You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 
how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides
you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have
but remember you are in my thoughts

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
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if you love it..i can judge it

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i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)



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u r rite akshat...waiting is never easy.
n this poem expresses the fact so flawlessly.. luvd it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Boy can I relate to this one! Well done. Very descriptive. Keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"So now I am left alone in your past" I love that line and all that it says. It's a sad meaning you expressed in this, but you did it nicely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's good your poems make alot of since to me keep writing....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly liked this write and concur with the cigarette line. Very original.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Crushed my heart like a cigarette' great line there. Overall nice poem!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it. Great poem, shows how much you love this person

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing. Emotional outstanding work. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg this is so amazing. absolutely beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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