Numb

Numb

A Poem by Akshat♥
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When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

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         Huge scream
      Heavy noise
      High tension

      Large Illusion
      Long pain
      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose
     Taking risks
     Lot of Expectations
 
     Why I am afraid
     I don't know, I can't see
     I am my worst enemy
 
     You look around and all you see is hurt
     And I am the one who can't be saved
     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions
     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,
     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait
     I am running out of space
     I stayed where my last step left me
     Maybe I am the one to blame
       Maybe we are all same...
 

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

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This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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I wish I could heal you
that's just I want you to say to you!

Lovely Piece! and very true!


Posted 3 Years Ago


Akshat♥

3 Years Ago

We cant heal anyone if they are far away. Misunderstandings happen always. Thank you
It was interesting. I had to go back and read it twice. Making me wonder what is this person going which, made me think they were paralyzed. From fear, from the noise of others, from yourself, all the many things you listed causing us to stop on our path. Plus this paralization of numbness it's something we all enounter whether we notice or not; making us all the same in one way or another. Anyways well done. The poem really grasped my attention with the coordination of words and the color scheme that went with them.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Akshat♥

5 Years Ago

Thank you:)
"and I am the one who can't be saved - hiding myself behind the caves " I like really liked this section - thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)
this poem say a the story of everyone! everyone feel the pain one day or the other! perfectly depicts the confusion of emotions in our life!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
We all have the problems that scream at us issues that miuse us. Until were dust until were dust....
Just kite in the wind, just sail in the ocean... Just breathe... And take it easy... Tis love is all

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Something about the last few stanzas kind of put me off and I can't tell what it is. The last stanza I felt like there was just a whole bunch of different ideas being said in those four lines. But I got the meaning of the poem and the description was good. J'adore! -Ian

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It's an interesting poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Akshat♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I really enjoyed this one, Akshat. It is raw and emotional with a lot of great images. You speak some truths in this piece as well as give the reader questions to ponder. This poem shows that you are becoming more complex with your writing. I can appreciate that. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

thank you dear:)
this is exceptionally wonderful...!!!
very very well done..!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Saumya

8 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!
wonderful poem. I actually Liked the last 5 th stanza . We can Only get up from our huge losses when we see that who we really are .. keep writing more !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

thank U dear:)

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