Numb

Numb

A Poem by Akshat♥
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When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

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         Huge scream
      Heavy noise
      High tension

      Large Illusion
      Long pain
      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose
     Taking risks
     Lot of Expectations
 
     Why I am afraid
     I don't know, I can't see
     I am my worst enemy
 
     You look around and all you see is hurt
     And I am the one who can't be saved
     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions
     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,
     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait
     I am running out of space
     I stayed where my last step left me
     Maybe I am the one to blame
       Maybe we are all same...
 

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

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This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)



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Lovely lines. Very thought-provoking

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
ah the pain and the strength needed to get up after the fall.... after the physical fall... after the mental, emotional fall.....
nice one :) liked it

and yes we all are the same, scared in our heart :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

more than ok..take care :)
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

u too take care :)
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Sure! thnx:)
I think I understand now why your poetry seems to touch so many here on the cafe. You give that little child inside you a voice...this voice is a beautiful reminder of who we are...and what we ought to be.

Good things come to those who wait

I am running out of space

I stayed where my last step left me

Maybe I am the one to blame

Maybe we are all same...


"perfect...so simple..but perfect"

:))

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

I personally don't know about my poetry and where it stands..
and yes i am child who is trying.. read more
I think I understand now why your poetry seems to touch so many here on the cafe. You give that little child inside your a voice...this voice is a beautiful reminder of who we are...and what we ought to be.

Good things come to those who wait

I am running out of space

I stayed where my last step left me

Maybe I am the one to blame

Maybe we are all same...


"perfect...so simple..but perfect"

:))

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really liked the last para..
filled with truth. emotional too :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Standing up again is really hard but at the same time really important..Really nice write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Dakshta

10 Years Ago

welcome :)
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

:P
Gosh...just look at the truckload of feelings involved...BINGO!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you anusha :)
And this is the best :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

thank you..means a lot to me :)
This is something different..good job!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thanks paridhi :)
supalike...... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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