Numb

When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

 
         Huge scream

      Heavy noise

      High tension

      Large Illusion

      Long pain

      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose

     Taking risks

     Lot of Expectations

 

     Why I am afraid

     I don't know, I can't see

     I am my worst enemy

 

     You look around and all you see is hurt

     And I am the one who can't be saved

     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions

     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,

     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait

     I am running out of space

     I stayed where my last step left me

     Maybe I am the one to blame

       Maybe we are all same...

 

Author's Note

Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Eile MacIntyre]

'Why am I afraid
I don't know, I can't see
I am my own worst enemy'

Love those lines. A lot.

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[Maggie]

nice! :)

[Akshat♥]

thnx!

[Pax]

we are all the same when it comes to this:

Huge scream
Heavy noise
High tension

Large Illusion
Long pain
Little darkness

Afraid to lose
Taking risks
Lot of Expectations

we all suffer from that, but we do keep strong and never give up.

[Akshat♥]

yes you are absolutely right:)

[Pradnya]

good work

[Akshat♥]

thank you..

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Nice write..:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Pramod]

Last line "Maybe we are all same..." don't know about others but I'm feeling same, as I'm approaching toward the end of my student life, I'm much astound, still I hope for the best

[Akshat♥]

thanks for the reviewing this piece:)

[Audrey Howitt]

Nicely done!!

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[reema]

such a nice piece :)

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[Alicia Schroeder]

A differant kind of vibe, but very well done.. I enjoyed it :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

:) yw

[Loner]

Nice in fact an awesome piece of work u have there
thanks for sharing....

[Akshat♥]

you are always welcome :)