I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[anjamaka]

Heartfelt. Very good!

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Tapsi]

You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice

those lines just did it. beyond par.
thank you.

[Akshat♥]

:)

[Tapsi]

im putting them as my fb status, if u dont mind :P

[Akshat♥]

no prob.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

OK its got good sentiment but it appears somewhat confused in with one voice you are saying you can't feel anything but you are offering clarity to others?

[Akshat♥]

Theme of the poem is pretty same no doubt about that...
but I have changed the path in between

[Maya Storm]

This line stood out to me most of all
"...Its hard to express,
harder to impress.."

It's true, but also it's something that is not said often or in this way.

[Akshat♥]

I know that...
Thank you for the review::)

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"Those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind~ " Teehee had to say that from the second verse. Anyway great poem! I loved it! :3

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

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WELCOME! :D :D :D

[DarkAspen]

As always, I love your work. But I don't agree on some of the aspects of your poem. But I love it. As always. Keep up the amazing work! Sorry I have been so MIA

[Akshat♥]

please tell me....what are the aspects in my poem that you didn't like & why?
Thank you :)

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Great wisdom and pace!
"Its hard to express,
harder to impress.." and
"You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice"
Really hit home with me!! Great write.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Eile MacIntyre]

Clever write. The poem is perfect.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Pax]

i always believed in this line:

Life is always balanced
You have to think wise.

great and honest words. well done.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)