A Poem by Akshay

Under the sky, along the rainbow,
lies our city, city of show
The bigger you are, the better you look
you can get syringes poked to acquire a glow
Waiting in wraps, looking for snow,
waiting for the man who gives you your blow

It's morning
I'm awake but the sun's still yawning
I see couples forming
Why is it the guy who's always fawning

Under my eyes, around them too,
measure the lines, compare it with you
The smarter you are, the dumber you get
get piercings to make things like when you met
Waiting in wraps, sweating some glue
hate the television channel you set

It's night
I'm sleepy, but the circles around my eyes need maintenance
We can always fight
till I surrender in acceptance

© 2014 Akshay

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wow. very descriptive, and poetic. can't wait to read your other writings! great job! and also, can you do me a HUGE favor and review, (and read) 'the silver necklace'? I want to know what others think of it. any constructive criticism is totally open! but again, great job!

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Added on August 30, 2014
Last Updated on August 30, 2014



Delhi, India

20 - No speciality. I'm hard on myself. Not a good listener. I write to feel better, not because I'm great. I like to live in my own la la land. I hate drunks. I like to drink. more..

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