Psychic
A Book by Alana Taylor
 You've got a typical teenage girl and guy. Naturally, the sexual tension leads to endless flirting, but hold the groan: here's a shocker. Maddi's got more on her plate than romance.  © 2012 Alana Taylor
Author's Note
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When reviewing, please suggest how to improve:
- The realism of the dialogue
- The characterisation
- The description of setting
- The flow of structure and sentences
- The toning down of cliches
- The grammar
Well. Just help me get this right. I'll do the same.
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I look forward to reading this....I just wish I wasnt at work or i would dive in right now!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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ok so, im in love with chapter one. Good introduction and great descriptions. i will read chapter 2 later on, keep it up
Posted 12 Years Ago
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I will do what I can as promised.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on March 3, 2012
Last Updated on March 3, 2012
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Alana TaylorLondon, United Kingdom
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I'm here because I want to share my writing. That is my main reason, and due to it being so, I don't take free read requests - you'll have to return the favour. I can promise you, however, that the re.. more..
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