This Is Me

I may be an animal.

A lusty man, carnal.

Full of hatred and pain; I shun away from what hurts me most.

Humans.

I cry, unseen.

Moan, unheard.

Yet, it pierces through the heavens.

Touching the very heart of God.

For He loves me.

Jesus, you alone. ♥

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

Darn does yours end with who? I had written more beyond that, alas my pathetic internet access has once again thwarted my attempts at creative expression! XD But sincerely, you have written well and so deserve praise. I'm glad it means much to you, as it should, because your art means much to the world and one day you may change it entirely. Keep up the good work! :D

[Winslow Des Totes]

GAH! I think I accidentally deleted my reivew! OH NO! I'm so sorry! >.< Grr I'm just awful at this, do forgive me. Your poem was spectacular and held great heart and emotion, above all know that! Again, sorry, I'm just sucking at life today! XD

[Alcoholocaust]

Please do review my other poems, if you would.

I really need advice on how I could improve them. :]

[Winslow Des Totes]

I will review them but sadly, I am no critic and can offer little advise for the sake of improvement you made need to look elsewhere. Though I will gladly try, as you have impressed me with your ability in expression and prose. :)

[Alcoholocaust]

HAHAHAHA.

I'm not looking for professional advice, just your thoughts.

It would be good to know what others think, would it not?

[Winslow Des Totes]

Of course! I only didn't want you to expect any more of me then I could give. :) As anyone would want of someone who's opinion matters.

[Alcoholocaust]

Yes, I understand.

Thank you.

[Winslow Des Totes]

I'm glad.

[Alcoholocaust]

Me too. :]