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A Poem by Fades



All you did,

was to fade

out of my life,

out of my sight,

and now,

all I have

is a picture

of you,

etched deep

in my memories

Happy memories

that brings pain,

to the heart,

pain unbearable

to the touch.

Now that you are gone

A rough river

now flows

between the distance

of our hearts.

And the bridge

torn asunder

within the distance

of our hearts.

As the storm rages

howling within me,

aching through me,

and the rain pours

from my eyes

and my heart.

And now,

all I have,

is a picture

of you

etched deep

in my heart.

© 2012 Fades

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This was a very deep poem and I absolutely love your metaphor with the river and the bridge. That was clever and simple, great job. A lot of people are able to relate to this, me included. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very deep and powerful can those rivers run.. :) Amazing work. I liked this..xo

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 18, 2012
Last Updated on April 18, 2012



Baramati, India

I am usually not around anymore :) Gemini - Your Love Profile Your positive traits: Your lively, outgoing attitude attracts people to you everywhere you go. You can talk your way i.. more..

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