Just F*****g Kill Me

Just F*****g Kill Me

A Poem by Ian
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Do you really think I've forgot about these things?

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We'll love the few happy moments we had together

You’ll start raving about good old times

And I’ll end up saying just the opposite words

No, I never really forgot those little stains

 

So if you’ll say you want to strangle me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to asphyxiate me

Even when my eyes tell you how much I hate you

 

And with your silence you pretended to tell me it didn’t happened 

But once my words got to your ears, past turned into present

The first and last warning to shut my mouth forever  

Because that what you saw on my lip wasn’t red ink

 

So if you’ll say you want to shoot me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to pull the trigger

Even when my eyes tell you how much I hate you

 

And I know we all go through hard times

But you made me go through hell because you “love me”

Just a week attempt to keep everything under your damn control

In this goddamn kingdom you own, this battlefield

 

So if you’ll say you want to behead me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to slit my throat

Even when you know I hate you

 

I just hope you regret about it

What made you think I had forgiven you?

I just hope you suffer about it

What makes you think I’ll ever do it?

 

So if you’ll say you want to kill me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s just hope you got the guts to do it

 

© 2010 Ian


Author's Note

Ian
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perfectly amazing. i really like this, the anger and hatred is radiated here (though i guess that goes without say) strongly written, no hesitation at all and i love that. great write, awesome job.
P.S. Hi Ian! its been awhile not sure if u remember me haha...

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I Loved the darkness the passion the constriction and dismay that you brought into my mind the imagery so vivid was really a privilege to come across your work you have true writing talent I loved the structure and the repetitiveness of the character well done

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this in one of those oh! so wow! writes. It's like a painting that has all the colors. But just like everyone else I have some favs as well. In regards to this write I love the way pain, anger and hatered have been given their due share of respect. With that said the beauty of write lies in its raw emotional content. It amazingly resembles to something that I wrote. Its feels very similar. I can so relate to this peice of yours.
wonderfully done, friend!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfectly amazing. i really like this, the anger and hatred is radiated here (though i guess that goes without say) strongly written, no hesitation at all and i love that. great write, awesome job.
P.S. Hi Ian! its been awhile not sure if u remember me haha...

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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i love the fact that you are not afraid to express your emotion and thoughts through the beautiful way of poetry and lyrics. your hatred and anger for this person or situation was easily felt by the way you used your words. bravo, love!!!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

strong emotions, good write.. thats how i feel right now... just f*****g kill me...

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm lots emotion in this write
Great Job

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its like really good =) hahha. no idea how to explain how x] am such a dork lol! well its good =D

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm just like you. I love little rants. Stuff that weighs me down till the point I suffocate. Then I let it all out, and it feels like I can finally inhale again. Nicely said, even if it's all the negative stuff.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack the ripper couldn't have written a more profound poem or should that be jack the ripper's victims before they died,there is real raw emotion in this poem almost shakespearian in the brutality of the agression towards the would be killer,i for my part would plead self defence or crime de passion,the best rule of murder is never get caught and for my part this is why i could never kill anyone i would be so sloppy i would have to take someone to the white cliffs of dover then push them over for me to get away with it hee hee.
But i hate kent and those people that dwell within this rotten county which is why that scenario would never happen,nice going kiddo you must have one mean badass boyfriend.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. I like the emotions being felt from it. Its somewhat creepy but i really like it. Sometimes it doesnt flow well but i still like it a lot.

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