Pain

Pain

A Poem by Alex Miller<3
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It still hurts

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Pain...it hurts
Hurt...its everywhere
Everywhere....my thoughts scattered
Scattered...my scars
Scars....slowly heal
Heal...my heart
Heart...so much love
Love....no more
More....hate
Hate...you
You...hurt me
Me...moving on
On...the edge
Edge...of reason
Reason...you
You...kill me
Me...dead
Dead...the end
End...of life
Life...gone

© 2011 Alex Miller<3


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Alex Miller<3
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Great use of the word pain. Many ways to try to cure pain. Only time is the real haler. I like the flow and the short statements. A hard ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing


Posted 12 Years Ago


Life hurts....and through love and loss the pain only reminds us that we are alive. Why does life hurt? Gods sick joke. Ahhhh lifes lessons are painfully true and yours belong to you which you have expressed so well! Kudos!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 28, 2011
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Alex Miller<3
Alex Miller<3

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My name is Alex Miller I've been writing poems and short stories since I was 8 I am now 16 and I enjoy poetry and understand it as if I were an adult. more..

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