Can you see what I see?

Do you see it?

Out my bedroom window,

I see a sweet surprise.

I see this glowing ball of flame,

The sun's about to rise.

It's a new day and I am a new me

No longer dark and hidden

For once I'm happy.

Can you see what I see?

My future seems so bright.

Can you see what I see,

Going on with out a fright.

You won't keep me down.

You won't take away my smile.

You won't make me frown.

So quit acting like a child.

Foolish boy

I'm not your toy

and no longer my feelings will you destroy.

So in closing I ask once again

Can you see what I see?

Author's Note

Just trying something... Does it work?

Reviews

[Samhwain]

I get two feelings from this

one ;; rising over a break up the way the sun rises fresh every morning.

two ;; tackling each day in life as it comes.

that's what I feel from it. Wonderfully written

[Rakesh Roushan]

Yeah i can see the new rising star beneath myself conquering all bad dreams and rising over all to the ultimate .... Nice poem