I shall shed a tear

I shall shed a tear

A Poem by Alex Miller<3
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Long nights of crying over you....

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If you were here at this moment 
You'd see me cry.
If you bothered to ask me why,
I would turn away as if I were shy.

I wouldn't speak a word to you
Nor, answer your calls or texts
I would silently drift away.
To see how'd you react.

If you were to stay 
If you were to care
Maybe I wouldn't push you away
Maybe I would share...

I shall shed a tear for all my scars
I shall shed a tear for all that use to be ours

You don't care
To the point of...well it's endless
Now I'm truly done....
That's it...I'm finished

© 2011 Alex Miller<3


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Heartfelt!

Although, it's never been my reaction to boys. But then again, according to the boys I did know, I was never the "desirable" type. I freaked them out too much. I was too independent, too opinionated, too geeky (physics, astronomy & computer science), .....
Boys are great at showing you how to do things - but when you try to show them (or beat them at a science competition) --- the four year old boy in them quickly comes out!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sad, sorrowful words, beautifully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Some tears can be for sadness or happiness. Few people care for the people around them. I like the story and the description in this poem. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh my.. This is beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heartfelt!

Although, it's never been my reaction to boys. But then again, according to the boys I did know, I was never the "desirable" type. I freaked them out too much. I was too independent, too opinionated, too geeky (physics, astronomy & computer science), .....
Boys are great at showing you how to do things - but when you try to show them (or beat them at a science competition) --- the four year old boy in them quickly comes out!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Such a sad well expressive write, enjoyed this

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Woah. This is great, I really feel where it's coming from

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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