Winter

Winter

A Poem by Alex Doerner
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Something I wrote today.

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Dead leaves,
dead tree,
the coldest winter yet has me on my knees.

You smile,
I cry.
The beauty of everything,
everything but you,
has been lost on me.

Searching for the beauty in the snow,
I found you.
Pale white skin,
puffy chapped lips,
and snowflake eyes.

Cold to the touch,
warm to the kiss,
all I can think about are your chapped lips.

Dead leaves,
dead trees,
but you are the one that has me on my knees.

© 2017 Alex Doerner


Author's Note

Alex Doerner
I'm not big on poetry, but this just sort of happened today. Any and all criticism is welcome. :)

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no criticism, love your unique way of writing your poetry. Touching, inspirational, thank you Alex for sharing with us :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh my God! I loved it! Talk about a very deep and alluring piece! I normally don't do it either but i'm learning to step out of my comfort zone. Please write more poetry! You're great at it.

I loved it!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2016
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Alex Doerner
Alex Doerner

Yorktown, IN



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