A Photograph

a reflection of yourself

There she is

Can you see her?

Shes there

swirling

in baby blue and purple

Do you see her eyes?

Liquids orbs of gold and green

watching your eyes

to see herself

Do you see the sunset?

The brilliant red rustling

old branches

shaking them of their children

A wave will crash

over her head

and she will disappear

beneath

a gory gold and crimson surface

a breeze ripples the water

and

she rises above

she will always breathe again

Author's Note

Lemme know what you think of how I described her emotions and characteristics

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautifully rendered.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Moon =]

[Baby Ricochet]

I saw her

[AleyshaRosa]

me too

[RachelReaper]

oh, this was cool, it was in a sense, the poem unveiling itself more and more as it went on and I really liked that about it :) This poem was imaginative and the descriptions were wonderful

[AleyshaRosa]

As always, always, always, Rachel
Thanks, thanks, thanks =]

[Poison Ivy]

its very vivid! talent flowing through out! excellent!

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks pi =]
Review much appreciated

[NathanBlackie]

It feels like you say the emotion about her, not her emotion. like an observation.

[AleyshaRosa]

Do you think it`s a good perspective, or too distancing?

[NathanBlackie]

I love it, it's like you're showing a person as a series of events. I thought it was supposed to be distant because of the distance she seems to present. I'm not sure but I think parts of it are a facade, and other things are the colors coming through. but it's your work, you'd know it better.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thnx. Exactly what I was going for and some of it is definitely a facade =]