c**t

I promise i promise

shut the f**k up

you havent promised s**t

dont you dare tell me you will

when you know you f*****g wont

but really thats not what this is about

no this is something so much more

this is you smiling a grin

yeah something handsome

this is you convincing youre perfect

yeah something perfect

but you just wait

until your gums bleed

and my knuckles bruise

oh honey you f*****g wait

do you understand what trust is

no i didnt think so

wheres your brain

oh yeah up your a*s

smells good up there dont it

cant wrap your mind round s**t

go run away go f**k her hard

yeah give yourself up

let her dirty fingers linger

unlike you i know where theyve been

i hope you f**k f**k f**k good

oh baby i cant wait i cant wait for you

no baby you cant wait to cum

go ahead give her a shower

shell love you forever

baby i was drunk

baby im sorry

go f**k yourself

baby you better remember

shes just another f*****g

c**t

to add to your list.

Author's Note

sha BOO yeah

Reviews

[Stephen C Morgan]

You know, I'm kinda annoyed that some people are saying negative things about this poem or whatever anyone wants to call it. I do drama. In Drama, we take a piece of text, a scene, etc and make it our own - we give it our own interpretation. Therefore, this is your own interpretation of a way of writing in which you are releasing or expressing something that you want to.

In order words, and I hope you don't mind me saying, but this.is.freakin'.AMAZING!

Like, I feel like doing this whole victory dance and everything. It's powerful, in your face, gets to the point and let's face it. When something like this happens, this is obviously the "get-the-f***-out-of-my-life" kinda poem everyone needs to hear.

Whoops. I wrote an essay. :P I love it!!

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Steven
I really appreciate the essay =P
I honesty don't really care if anyone says anything negative about it, because just like the guy I'm talking about, they can deal with it.

Thanks again =]

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Stephen
I really appreciate the essay =P
I honesty don't really care if anyone says anything negative about it, because just like the guy I'm talking about, they can deal with it.

Thanks again =]

[Jess Darnell]

Watch the lanuage, but ok.

[AleyshaRosa]

What supremely interests me, is that you clicked on a poem called "c**t" yet, you mention my language usage... Interesting.
Nonetheless
Thanks, Jess

[Sunny Skye]

Lol! I am not laughing at your pain. But this guy is sure getting his a*s kicked. Wow this is a piece of work huh. It expresses the anger of a person that has been cheated on very well. I like it. A few grammar mistakes that i'm sure you can catch if you read it, everything else is good to me. Nicely done expresses the anger very well. :D

-SkyeBlanco

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Skye

As a sidenote, Slam Poetry is meant to be whatever the fxck it wants, and I used this opportunity to the fullest extent. I literally gar-berated and literary elements, language and, yes, grammatical errors.

[AleyshaRosa]

But, of course, thank for the review-- no bitterness behind the sidenote

[Sunny Skye]

lol no problem

[advar]

This means nothing to me because it is just a bundle of insults. Also, this is disgusting and is far from poetry for me - 'oh yeah up your a*s//smells good up there dont it'. Plus some poor grammar here and there, however I'm not sure if that's intended because you seem to be in a fragile state of mind and can't think straight?

[NathanBlackie]

you do understand the concepts of art and expression right?

[NathanBlackie]

by the way that's a genuine question. the thing is she gets a point across and if you're willing to look there's a story. there are only two other things you'd expect to find in a piece of writing called "c**t" and the fact you were disappointing with what you got really says something about your character.

[advar]

In response to your question, the truth is that no one fully understand the concepts of art and expression because the grounds are so broad and diverse. And please tell me what it says about my character...

[advar]

Further, what does this say about your character then - "feel free to follow me on twitter, talk to me, become a friend"...?

[NathanBlackie]

firstly not sure what you're implying about me. secondly; what I was implying wasn't confusing at all; knowing the meaning of the word c**t and the social implications of it. and the broadness was what I was talking about with the art, if it's classified as art and not literature then it's judged a different way, it expresses what it needs to so it wasn't bad at all.

[advar]

Hey, I never said the poem was bad, just that it didn't appeal to me on first viewing. Then on second viewing, it again didn't appeal to me. And on third, and so on. Also, what are you talking about; "the social implications of the word c**t" - you're really digging a deep hole here. Let's leave it there before you embarrass yourself even further.

[NathanBlackie]

I don't get embarrassed, don't see any hole being dug. and if you don't know the social implications of the word c**t then i have to ask if English is your first language?

[advar]

Yeah I can tell you don't get embarrassed - nothing to be proud of. As a matter of fact no it is not my first language - why does it matter? The word 'c**t' refers to a woman's genitals... Am I not correct?

[NathanBlackie]

also what were you implying about me?

[NathanBlackie]

yeah, but it's considered also the most offensive word in the English language.

[advar]

Each to their own.

[NathanBlackie]

okay, that was incredibly ambiguous .

[NathanBlackie]

yeah, cause the fact I want to meet like minded people really makes me sound like a tool right?

[advar]

Nah don't worry. Answer how you please but as a matter of interest, how old are you?

[NathanBlackie]

eighteen

[NathanBlackie]

you're going to respond right? not just ask a weird question and leave.

[advar]

All I can say is... Ok? I dunno how to respond to something like that

[NathanBlackie]

well now i'm assuming you're assuming that I'm immature. that you have some sort of satisfaction in thinking i'm ignorant because of my age. people need to see age doesn't matter; it's just a number. maturity is what counts. and part of that is supporting new artists, if you don't they might stop making art, you can constructively criticize all you want. but the moment you start tearing down somebodies work you're being both immature and selfish; that might have been a hard piece to write for all you know. even if a work turns out crap it's intention wasn't to be, and if people don't work on trying to reach their intention then they'll never be able to truly express what they want. I'm sorry if I've been seeming aggressive, but "far from poetry" crossed a line.

[advar]

I'm sixteen.

[NathanBlackie]

that's just a number.

[Sunny Skye]

And i'm fourteen and very mature for my age as people say and i believe also i believe this conversation is pointless :D

Yeah i don't care i read it 'cause i was bored.

[NathanBlackie]

it was pointless thanks for pointing that out.

[Sunny Skye]

No problem. :D

[Marie]

No problem indeed? Why can't everybody see what a piece of class this is? The imagry is beautiful.Each line is like a lovely, lyrical song. Every word is a piece of shining gold. My own poor efforts at poetry cannot possibly match this. I might as well give up.

[NathanBlackie]

I was saying it's good... i only now realize it might seem otherwise. I really really like it, and got angry when someone didn't.. so yeah

[Jordan's Back]

This is Violent Aggressive and Expresses the feelings of a Hurt Raging person who has had a cheating lover very well, Its got Rage, and an almost satirical Quality to it, I hope your transitional pain is minimal. Great Write.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, MD
It's true, a figurative a*s kicking.
Transitional pain, Mmm, yes minimal.

[Sirius King]

Lol love it

[AleyshaRosa]

=P
rawr
Thanks, Serenus

[Sirius King]

np :-)

[That_Girl]

It definitely feels good to just bash someone into the ground via poetry. Or actual violence. ;) Love it!

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh yeah...
Awesome release. Bashing his face in would feel pretty good too tho =D

[B-poet]

A woman scorned who's naturally venting. There's no other way she could've said it best at the end. You can feel the angst from the text. Nice write because it's more about the emotions behind the words than just the frank usage of them. I truly understand why women hate men nowadays. It's sad though because this cycle has been going on for far to long now. Who knows if this new generation will break the cycle. Good write again. It was entertaining as well :)

[Noah Dain]

I know that probably wasn't directed to all of this generation's people. But I'm just here to remind you that there are guys in this world (such as myself), which are part of the generation you are referring to you, that don't fall under the immature & sex-crazed category.

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh good, I know there's a few golden eggs out there
(one of which is my bf =])
Thanks for the review, as always, BP

[jacob erin-cilberto]

would hate to be the one spoken about in this piece.

sheer anger on blatant display...

but when the other is having an affair..this is the real guts of the feelings.

jacob

[AleyshaRosa]

Yeah...
A spew of emotions, really.

Thanks again

[Noah Dain]

Nice. Are you alright though? Haha, you seem mad at someone.

[AleyshaRosa]

Ahahah yeahh I'm fine. He's an a*****e.
All my poems are definitely not this angry, but every now and then it feels good to slam.