Broken Wings

Broken Wings

A Poem by AleyshaRosa

Your growling

Snarling

Your grinning

Spitting

Your viciousness

Vengefulness

“Oh how unconditionally

I am sorrowfully

Reaching for your spirit

I can hear it!”

It bellows

And plows

Through my small heart

Thou art,

I shall say

I shall pray

“My darling, I will always be unconditional in my love.

Now break my wings like a dove.”

 

 

© 2013 AleyshaRosa


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AleyshaRosa
Please let me know what you think, because I have no idea.

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Elisa nailed the fact that it really sounds great out loud, it honestly sounds like it could be lyrics in a new metal band. Thank you for sharing. =)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the way how this read out loud, a very clever write, with much meaning....

You express light and dark very well in this one, thank you for sharing...

- Elisa

Posted 6 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

6 Years Ago

Thanks much, Elisa

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Has the feel of two people in one person ... who are starting to come to know of each other. Some people keep pigeons to help them manage. Its not always contradictory ... but does grow with a search ... to know oneself better.

Posted 6 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

6 Years Ago

Mmmm I like your interpretation, I didn't think of it that way...
Thank you, Dayran
Wow. You've done an excellent job here. The words fell over each other, tumbling down like an avalanche. Very apt. No doubt when the heart breaks it feels as though the world's collapsing.
Thank you for sharing :-) Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

6 Years Ago

Wow, what a beautiful description of my poem, thanks much!
i get the feeling of your heart being broken by a two-faced lover. someone who is dishonest and talks a lot of stuff but you never know if they mean it. i am liking it a lot

Posted 6 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

6 Years Ago

Definitely some of the thoughts I had while writing this poem, thanks for taking them into account =.. read more
I think it's an emotional piece .. it's a piece of someone life who's been broken and become outcast.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on November 10, 2013
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AleyshaRosa
AleyshaRosa

Abbotsford, BC, Canada



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