What's Behind the  Door?

What's Behind the Door?

A Story by AlinaTheCacti
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Written for the 25 words contest

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I hear it moving...
The floor is creaking...
My breathing gets heavier...
My heartbeat races...
I'm sweating to death...
The door opens...
I scream!
Laughter.

© 2018 AlinaTheCacti


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I'm sweating to death kind of broke the flow but I loved the last line and how it builds up to the rest of the poem. Thanks for sharing

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Added on February 15, 2018
Last Updated on February 15, 2018
Tags: Short Story, 25 words, scary

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AlinaTheCacti
AlinaTheCacti

Canada



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I'm a EXTREMELY younger writer that loves to draw, read and write, compared to many others more..

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