Secret Birds

Secret Birds

A Poem by Alistair (Ali)

Lost leaves ago, before
the bark- clad savage
ruled with iron lung,
when  laurels of
a one- room den, grew
sleek with wet- lid plunder
my sauntering in tousles of
a brief and creaseless happiness
beheld the gifted wish of secret birds.

birds that combed the milking beech
in lemon centred madrigals 
to cove their Egypt orison
from dragon banks of slippered fern
Who threw their mooted sermons on
a shivering uncertainty that bubbled
through my vernal rut of optimistic blood


Such useless pleasure, I was told
That I was not a Father's son
yet bore his term an absolute.
As all my nimble colours ran, I 
wore his pungent bitterness 
Became the thing that he preferred

Before the dungeon keys had turned
basket weaving weeks of youth

I took the gifted wish
of secret birds.

© 2017 Alistair (Ali)


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I am speechless. You truly are the definition of a poet. This is beautifully written. You have an amazing gift.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alistair (Ali)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words- but I promise you this, the verse is only true if it touches .. read more
Wistful, whimsical, wonderful...a young man’s “gifted wish of secret birds” cherished far away from the madding crowd of one dungeon-master...so eloquent with musical flow and cadence,tendrils of mesmerizing, pristine imagery that create a secret world of magical dreams. Thank you for sharing this beauty. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alistair (Ali)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, kindly- those birds sent me to Egypt and the Mediteranean Islands- I followed their song .. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Years Ago

So amazing! You must have such beautiful stories to tell. If you write them, I will read them! Glad .. read more
Alistair (Ali)

6 Years Ago

And its a pleasure to know you too!

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Added on December 9, 2017
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Alistair (Ali)
Alistair (Ali)

Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom



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