Directions For Destiny's Heartland

Directions For Destiny's Heartland

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
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Decided to repost....hope you don't mind.

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Westerly flows on

a northbound

express..

Trembling wasteland

in the dreams of

her dress...

 

Southerly tides

in East Michigan’s

winter...

cascading skies

under a buried

splinter...

 

Destiny’s heartland

in the middle of

nowhere...

condoms and fish gear

on a diet of

Lite Beer...

 

 


 

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
December 3, 2000
touched up July 30, 2009
Picture of Marilyn in Key West, Fla. - February, 2011

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Wow! Very nicely written. I loved the choice of words. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice. I like the photo and the interesting used words in the stanzas, I like this part:
"Trembling wasteland
in the dreams of
her dress..."

Posted 9 Years Ago


sweet poem its nice to be read. I really enjoyed it

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very enjoyable poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A mini story well told... I love the last stanza it made me smile.. it brought it home to the center of it all.. the heartland..x

Posted 9 Years Ago


My daughter would love this one, she is a big fan of Marilyn Monroe. I loved it too, especially the rythm. Thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ha! i love the ending ^-^ this was a good write it kept me happy :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Your poems seem to leave me speechless beautifully written, what an amazing job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Excellent penning & wonderfully told... Bravo

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have to resist reading the last stanza first with your poems - and I'm glad I resisted here. Wonderful write, with the perfect twist at the end...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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