Days of Future's Past (Haiku)

Tomorrow’s sunshine

just for fun and just because;

I missed it today.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

written: July 25, 2009
Photo: Bonita Springs, FL .. January 16, 2010

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I love Haiku, but have never mastered the short and sweet. But I love the truth behind them, in this particular one I can relate in the sense that I tend to put off till tomorrow what I can get done today. But no sunset will be as sweet as the one that you miss, for the one that you see tomorrow could pale in comparison, but it doesn't hurt to watch anyhow...for each one painted is unique in its own accord.

As indicated by my long-winded reviews-Haiku is NOT my forte-I applaud yours!

[~Lizzy♬]

So many beautiful meanings, but one true power. :)

~Lizzy~

[Chris Yip]

Beautiful words and photo that paint a thousand words, sunsets and sunrises.

[Brad]

nice haiku, bro, had a beauty day yesterday too...almost missed it myself

[AK]

Very nicely expressed! It is wonderful how you bring out so much emotion out of a mere twelve words!

[Ruth]

Love this! Says it all in condensed form, what a piece! Glorious love xoxo

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Beautiful with a hint of regret and disappointment.

[zero binty]

Never regret the yesterday, there's always today and tomorrow.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice one.And filled with lots of ideas,not just a good description.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely Allen!