Hatred Veins

Hatred Veins

A Poem by Allison

I hate you.


I hate you!

You naive, back-stabbing b***h!

I hope you choke

on someone's dick.

Hatred flows through my veins

just for you.

You better run

before I come for you.

I'm gonna gut you

and watch you bleed.

Why did you have to

f**k with me?

I'm the wrong person,

didn't you see?

You were my best friend

and you really hurt me...

I f*****g hate you...

I f*****g miss you...

You f*****g son of a b***h.

F**k you! F**k me!

Why...why did you make me leave?

© 2010 Allison

Author's Note

God, I hate her.

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Dang...now that's some interior release of explosive anger...don't want to really get you mad...

just kidding...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Okay, so many people who use this amount of profanity in their writing manage too mess it up pretty badly. Not you though. This is a great poem; it has flow, rhythm, and PASSION.

Posted 10 Years Ago

WOW!!!!! umm....i guess ur mad...heheheh...but yea its so strong and expressive....I dont wanna mess with you....hehehehehe...good job...keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2010
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