A Poem by Alli-o

A man heals her broken heart, and she falls in love with him. But her emotions me nothing to him, and he re-breaks the heart he had once meticulously tried to put back together.

Thrown away, Left in the dark
A wounded soul, A  broken heart
Forsaken by the one I loved

Then someone rescued me, and took me home
He held me close, He kept me warm
He dried my tears and numbed the pain
He became my reason to live again

We shared smiles and laughter, never tears
I loved him so much and never ever feared
That someday he would leave me all alone
With no more love or smiles or a home

But one thing I shouldn't have forgotten
Was that male hearts are fickle and rotten
And another pretty girl showed up at random
He fell in "love", and I was again abandoned...

"Come back!" I got on my knees to plead
"You're my savior, it's you I will always need."
He turned one last time, looked me in the eye
And said, "I wish I would have let you die."

So now...I'm....

Thrown away, Left in the dark
A wounded soul, A  broken heart
Forsaken by the one I loved...

© 2010 Alli-o

Author's Note

Erm, not good at poetry....But critique please? So I can get better?

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Added on August 22, 2010
Last Updated on August 22, 2010
Tags: break up broken heart girl guy l



Pflugerville, TX

Sooooo...I dunno where to start So like, I'm a novice writer and I'm not that great, so readers, just bare with me XD I like horror, romance, mystery and all that great stuff I love animals and n.. more..

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A Poem by Alli-o