Just gone three in the morning

Could not sleep once more,
Just gone three in the morning,
Talking to the walls.

Author's Note

This is my secong haiku poem I' ve wrote on here and hope I've counted all of the syllables correctly. Any constructive critism you may have, i'll gladly accept. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[Blue Belle]

Although this poem is short, it says a lot in the minimum words that you have. I like that there is a mysterious side to this, such as "why couldn't you sleep?," "what were you 'talking' to the walls about?," "what was going on inside you head?" Now you don't have to answer any of these, it's just that these questions came to my thought after reading this, and I think good poetry says enough while making the reader still question. Great job! Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad that this poem remains in the readers mind after they''ve read it- forcing them to ask questions. People could have many different outlooks on this poem, so I don't want to take away the imaginaation for the reader and present them with tunnel vision. Yet, thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

[Blue Lotus]

very humorous.. and so very true at times splendid write! very much enjoyed it

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thanks for your review, I glad that this piece can be interpreted in so many different ways.

[Blue Lotus]

your most wlc :-)

[Cool Handless Luke]

a very catchy haiku indeed. one that i can relate to as of late. well done becky

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thanks for reviewing.

[Luke Rawlings]

A good haiku! It can be difficult to convey a strong poetic meaning in such a short structure, but you have accomplished it rather well.

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you very much.

[Rita L. Sev]

If I am awake at three in the morning, you can bet that I am not writing such a clever poem! :)

[Alone In A Crowd]

Thank you for your review, and if you were I think your poem would be utterly hillarious.