Just gone three in the morning

Just gone three in the morning

A Poem by Alone In A Crowd

Could not sleep once more,
Just gone three in the morning,
Talking to the walls.

© 2013 Alone In A Crowd


Author's Note

Alone In A Crowd
This is my secong haiku poem I' ve wrote on here and hope I've counted all of the syllables correctly. Any constructive critism you may have, i'll gladly accept. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Although this poem is short, it says a lot in the minimum words that you have. I like that there is a mysterious side to this, such as "why couldn't you sleep?," "what were you 'talking' to the walls about?," "what was going on inside you head?" Now you don't have to answer any of these, it's just that these questions came to my thought after reading this, and I think good poetry says enough while making the reader still question. Great job! Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alone In A Crowd

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad that this poem remains in the readers mind after they''v.. read more
very humorous.. and so very true at times splendid write! very much enjoyed it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alone In A Crowd

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, I glad that this piece can be interpreted in so many different ways.
Blue Lotus

11 Years Ago

your most wlc :-)
a very catchy haiku indeed. one that i can relate to as of late. well done becky

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alone In A Crowd

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing.
A good haiku! It can be difficult to convey a strong poetic meaning in such a short structure, but you have accomplished it rather well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alone In A Crowd

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
If I am awake at three in the morning, you can bet that I am not writing such a clever poem! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alone In A Crowd

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, and if you were I think your poem would be utterly hillarious.

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Added on June 24, 2013
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Alone In A Crowd
Alone In A Crowd

United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm 15 and live in the United Kingdom. I started writing after my English teacher began helping me cope with the things I'm going through. I definately prefer poems and trying to add meaning to th.. more..

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