autumn's birth

autumn's birth

A Poem by Alpris

deep breeze
peninsula's gush of earth
her hair caught at her teeth
                                              as she smiled
we embraced beneath autumn's birth


and i could not breathe less
than waterfall crumble and canyon kiss
as we           kissed
her lips glided the rich mahogany
rouge of my lips
chandelier crystals
    afloat the creek's pores, they were ;
we               punished them
splashed together in slick bareness
tangles of seaweed padded
                                  our
                                      fall.

then did she bore her eyes into mine
this very autumn, i fell.


© 2013 Alpris


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we embraced beneath autumn's birth


and i could not breathe less
than waterfall crumble and canyon kiss
as we kissed
her lips glided the rich mahogany
rouge of my lips
chandelier crystals
afloat the creek's pores, they were ;
we punished them
splashed together in slick bareness
tangles of seaweed padded
our
fall...............

powerful words, only these stanza makes your poem complete indeed. well written, lovely write. loved to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Alpris
Alpris

Auckland, New Zealand



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